more than one language
Tattered and Worn ~ So We Pray
Whenever we translate into a language we understand, I have often wondered how much the meanings have changed. Especially when we translate songs, poems and more into what is our American English. I thought about what it would be like to go the other way. I have a love of hearing people speak or sing in their native language even if I don't understand it. Thanks to a grant from the Center for Art Humor and Soul (C.A.H.S.) I finally had a way to explore this idea. They are doing some amazing things as a non-profit and I encourage you to take the time to explore their work.
I previously worked with Nohemy Garcia, when she recorded two of my songs back in 2015. This time around, it was her skill at translating my lyrics into phrases and words that her people would understand. I'll give one brief example. The opening lyric in Tattered and Worn is
"I've got mixed feelings. I'm upside down, can't seem to find my way."
Nohemy explained to me doing a literal translation would have been silly as any Spaniard would wonder why you are upside down. Surely that won't solve anything! So she was intentional and deliberate in massaging the meaning into phrases that would make sense after translating.
She took the original tracks from 2015 into Yon’s studio and recorded new vocals in Spanish. It was notable in hearing how different she sang the language of her birth to one she learned later. My hope is that having these two songs in both will be another way of communicating. In both languages she did some marvelous work in giving these song life. Her voice and the person she is has elevated these songs into something beyond what I might have imagined when I wrote them all those years ago.
The lyrics and recordings in each language of both songs are posted below along with some thoughts from Nohemy. If you'd like to learn more about Nohemy's music please check out https://nohemy.bandcamp.com.
_ Jeff Raught 2021
Nohemy Ruth Garcia Soria
Translating the text
This project is more than just a recording. The moment I heard the songs and the story behind them I poured my heart into it because I connected with the meaning and the emotions conveyed in them.
It was a wonderful surprise that years later we would be trying to bring all that beauty and share it with others by translating the lyrics into Spanish. What a brilliant opportunity!
Translating songs is often a challenge because you want to get the most accurate sense of the songs and transfer it into Spanish and that’s not always easy. This project has opened the possibility to explore this and give it a beautiful new light. The melody is the same and yet, hearing it in my mother tongue gives it so much strength, such different colors and nuances… the sound and the richness of Spanish musicality makes listening to these two songs a whole new experience.
I encourage you to get both the English and Spanish version and to listen to one after the other and appreciate the nuances and the fragrant changes of each one of them. ~ Nohemy Ruth Garcia Soria
Tattered and worn - The Lyrics
SPANISH LYRICS - DEJAS AJADO MI SER
Un paso en falso, todo al revés. No sé ni qué sentir.
Duele el recuerdo y duele olvidar. Mañana volver a empezar
Y todo se agolpa, ya nada sigue igual ¿Qué quedará de mí?
Y confieso, casi cada vez:
Dejas ajado mi ser.
No hables de ello, mejor dejarlo ir. Huyo para volver.
Voy a aprendiendo, lo que ya aprendí. Tú no te alejas de mí.
Y todo se agolpa, ya nada sigue igual ¿Qué quedará de mí?
Y confieso, casi cada vez:
Dejas ajado mi ser.
ENGLISH LYRICS - TATTERED AND WORN
I've got mixed feelings. I'm upside down
Can't seem to find my way.
It hurts to remember, it hurts to forget
Tomorrow is just like today.
It all runs together, yet nothing stays the same
Wondering who I am.
Still I'm confessing, nearly all the time
I'm feeling tattered and worn.
Don't talk about it, just try and run away.
Escaping to come back home.
Slowly I'm learning, what I knew before.
God's never left me alone.
It all runs together, yet nothing stays the same
Finding out who I am.
Still I'm confessing, nearly all the time
I'm feeling tattered and worn.